Really like the kick at the beggining, nice driving bass, the atmosphere is great, wide and fresh, very good. Your bass needs bass arps to complete the drive, without it the foundation seems empty. The kick needs more click and the snare definitely needs to be changed.
The guitar is beautifull, nice melodies, but somethings still missing. You don't have that energy characteristic of other pro-tracks. Could be the compression/balance issue.
I want to hear more raw driving elements added so you can excite the listener.
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Hi guys tnx for the great replies My intetnion whit this track is to keep it chill and soft thats why I dont have a fast humping bass but the comments about the kick will be added to the track , and it feels empty because I need the space for the vocals =) if I add more elements in the foundation it might get very crowdy =( but as for the raw driving elements ill add it at the chours line! that should make this fly. Tnx again uppdate will be posted whit some adjustmens as commented soon. cheers - Mavve

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Hey mate,

If only you were to finish your other tracks first Listened to this sample. All sounds are pretty good in place, build up is a tad boring because you do not change the percussions a lot. When you change the bass during the build up you should accentuate that a bit more.

As for the break, again brilliant mate. I think you promised me a nice guitar riff. I think I'd better hold you up to that promise

PM me to exhange msn addresses mate. Perhaps we can help each other

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listening:

everything sounds very good .. until 1:30 the basschange there is not very pleasing to my ears.. and it sounds almost ofkey or something (not that i have the ears to hear it)

i dig the pads at around 2:10 along with the guitar, very pleasing to my ears.. although still the bass comes back and ruins it again..

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intro is sounds real cool, seems like you are setting up for something big


as stated before that bass change at 1:30 doesnt really fit too well

the percussion section is nice

i like that real nice mellow guitar you bring in later on...


overall real nice production value, keep workin on it and get a full track out of it! it has some really nice potential to be a killer tune

beautiful track man... the intro sounds great how it slides into the beat.
beat that comes in sound a little flat to me but when the tracks gets going a bit, it really picks up some style.
mastering is very smooth by the way.
pads get a little repetitous before the break, might wanna change up a little.
break is amazing...

great track...few things but amazing none the less!

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Hi guys sry it took so long to reply =)

Menno my friend the other tracks will finnish at the same time as this =) I promise, well you heard the new samples =)

and mr Subtle Tnx for mentioning the base or i would have forgoten it =) its changed now and i think it sounds better now =)

Mr rogers im happy you like it ! if you like this then you should hear the uppdate on this =) hahahahahah just kidin mate.

TranscendentalP tnx for the reply aswell , havent goten replies from you before =) so im glad i got one now! yes this track will be finnished as the same for my other trax, But I work in a wierd way , I have 3-4 different trax and work on everyone of those 1 day a week =) 1 day endlees 1 day electric culture 1 day blue marble and one day one remix for a friend here in TA. Tnx for the replies guys im looking forard to more of your replies now and on the uppdated version later on =)

I think I covered the most of the issues you guys brought up here and mixed it down the tune.

Ta ta - Mavve

Edit Sry but my english sux

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Last edited by mavve on Apr-12-2006 at 00:27