Yeh so, i've updated the sample. Substituted the pluck for a more PPK-style sound, also increased the reverb and delay to widen it up. Melody has been altered and there is now a sub synth that goes along smoothly with the main. I've also added a drone string during the build to give atmosphere and introduced an acid during the 8-ths.

An lookout for a vocal that brings in the bass.

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

Alright son

I'm listening now...

Cleaner sounding intro here...nice fx in the background here...waiting for the bassline to come in...doesnt . At the breakdown now - I like this melody, though as before I still think it's quite standard, although it sounds very push like. Definitely an improvement over the previous version, equing is better. That pad could do with having some of its high frequencies removed, either that or the twinkly bell sound.

Anyway good luck finishing it!

RickDOGG

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Cheers Ricky man, much appreciated.

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