jo mate,

the intro remembers me a bit of a theme from terminator movie with drums put under it.

kick sound is good on the low's but like kane said you need to layer a higher kick over it to make it bang, cymbal percussions do sound good, clap is almost not existent. dont like the offbeat snare.

2.00 i would use a different melody, the strings dont work together with the synth, btw synth sound is cool but pretty inharmonic on the last bars.

when i look at the drums this has a little tech trance feel here and there but alltogther it needs some work imo.

thanks for all the tips guys, i made a list of stuff to tinker with when i get the chance this weekend. do you think i should drop the strings in the lead portion all together or just change the melody of them?? or just try a different type pad there for the lead portion?

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a mean i wudnt drop them if you dont want to, the point is how to introduce them into the track... thats upto you though.

well i like them through the beginning part of the track up to the lead, they help support the dark atmosphere... i really like that string orchestra patch, it has such a nice dark atmosphere i use it in a few of my tracks. i started planning around with the kick layering a little bit using a multi band compressor on each one to filter out the highs mids or lows on each respective kick.

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im just bumping this because it seems people are replying to the clip i posted of this earlier before i had finished it... so those people can listen to the whole song now.

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sound quite dark and moody..needs stronger kik..raise percussion levels...arrangment is fine...lower crash...stick at it..keep up the good work..review my tune twisted by covert23 thanks michael