Greetings! Some of my personal opinions:
The overall piano riffs part can be richer in notation so that the track will sounds bit more full and melodic progression. Currently the notes stay between just a few intervals that you can hardly define an "harmonic" feel on the whole piece. If you wanna keep the current melody, you may try to put in more 1-shot fx to make it more "spacy" or put a mid-low pads to fill up the warmth part.
The good parts are well mixed and layering perc. Different elements are well tuned to where they belong and the mix is pretty clean, just a little bit too clean and could be fuller.
Somehow it sounds like an unfinished demo and got great potential in the track still.
b.rgd.

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I like it!

IMO, the beginning takes too long to get into the song. Maybe thats your aim, but I would get rid of maybe the first 30sec of the piano and just get into it a littl bit faster.

Other than that, its been mentioned, harden the bassline a bit, and ur set.

This track is so totally my taste!
Love the intro, love the bpm change, love the perc, love the speech.

10/10

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Thanks for the reviews. Yes the intro is long, technically the first 3 minutes are going to be track 1 on the album im working on, then after the tempo change it will seamless roll over to track 2.

I'm not sure whether the bassline is a taste problem, or a technical probably. I'll keep playing with it, but I think people are on to something, since most mention that the bassline could be a bit more bassy and present.

Thanks again for all the reviews. It's much appreciated.

---Adam Wrzeski

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hey Adam, this is rather interesting.

I think it's good and I totally like the piano but my feel is this is not finished. I definitely like the concept you have going here but it feels like you need something more to pull it all together. Haha, like I even know what I'm talking about.



Are you still working on this?

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Nu skal jeg betro dig min hemmelighed. Den er ganske ligetil:
kun med hjertet kan man se rigtigt. Det væsentlige er usynligt for øjet.