The mood of the melody doesn't fit the song. You buildup with a minor and make a melody that is major. It just doesn't seem to be part of the song imo. Lets see what others think.

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yeah I've been thinking a lot about it.....its kinda like 60% / 40% (I think it fits / I'll change it). dunno...I'll see what others think about it. thanks mate.

edit: btw I changed some other things like that ride and the chords, added a top-layer bass synth and changed some fx's.

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