I think its good enough, I would bye it!

Good luck!

Akia

Uh...yeah I'm keeping this track until I get sick of it. High quality production in my eyes. I hope all goes well with the labels because I'd definitely buy this track for sure. Very uplifting atmosphere and sounds. That lead is so effective for the track. Perfect sounds for the type of sound, atmosphere, and uplifting feeling you give the listener. I could go on and on about compliments, but I'll stop here.

Might put this in my next radio mix if you dont mind obviously?

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I love your track.

Now while I know you probably love that melody you busted out, and so do i, I really think it needs a key change. Or you just need to vary the melody a little more.

Otherwise, at 9:28 long. I hope a lable will pick up a track that long with only a little varience. But while I've heard MUCH MUCH worse tracks signed (haven't we all). I think this needs something more. A little more pinash, some more spice.

I mean there's a little bit, at 5:30. But it's not a lot. I dunno.

The production quality of this track are superb, I could listen to it a few times without getting bored. Definately.

BUT while I know this is "trance" so you're supposed to just set a groove for people to trance out too. I would prefer a little more melodic change.

Great overall though.

It gets my "plus one" of the day.

PS: The reason I didn't give my long minute by minute review like I normally do is because this track is so well done, and so finished, "technical" aspects didn't really need to be adressed since the production values are so high. However, I wanted to go in a more subjective direction with how I thought about your track. Hence the more opinionated review. Good luck with the lables and congrats on such a hot track.


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crisp tight sound like it's wrapped in a little ball. that's cool
kick is good. the other percs are kind of meh
nice bass and good travel with the kick
very middle of the road asot
good stuff
i send keep sending it out. it's very accessible stuff. good work.

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Originally posted by staticblue If i was to rework something, it would be some of the synths and maybe a more crispy bassline as i find it a bit bubbly right now. I would probably also add some more interesting elements, maybe some growly low synths and a tighter buildup during the climax

static blue remix ftw

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ryarni: of course not, don't mind at all

freaq: I see where you're trying to go with the comments and I apreciate your comment about the technical part of the track, seems like I've come somewhere when it comes to that part at least
Hmm about that little extra, suddenly some nasty ideas about vocals popped up in my head...maybe maybe

majutsu: I agree that it's asotish in one way but at the same time it's pretty far away from what I usually hear on asot (haven't listened for a while tho), but I dunno. I might not be objective enough since I've put in so much time and effort on the track.

oh and btw, if staticblue want to do a remix I'd be honoured. All he have to do is push the PM button and ask

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Originally posted by davedresden i suggest getting the gabriel & dresden prog-a-minute. in 3 easy steps you too could change the face of dance music. batteries not included. - dave

hey there! .
this track is really nice but well the choir pad sounds a bit .. cheap? ^^.
really like your break!
climax is really nice, like the melody .
second break .
like the claps.
outro is nice . alot of stuff going on!

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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good

I wouldn't call the choirs cheap, but they are used way too much, it's all over the track, a moment of 'silence' would improve this track alot. The melody is classic, but I'd like to see some more variation in the 2nd build-up, it's too much of the same at the moment. Also I'd like to see better percussion, more variation in the beat. This track has high potential, at least if you make something special of it.

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This is good...havent been to this part of the forum before today..
I really like this..sweet melo..nice bassline...but remember that i have a untrained ear..but i like this alot..

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Woah, I love that panning choir pad. It's so airy and nice. But I agree with fake_illusion, the pad is used a bit too much in the track. But still, it's a very nice sound.
Melody is good, lead synth works well. The percussion is really good, I struggle with that myself.
I would shorten the track by 1 minute, it's a bit too long, with not enough stuff happening to keep it interesting enough.
Over all, really good stuff.

I'm thinking about what I can do with the choire, I haven't really thought about it before but it might be more exciting if Idon't use it in the whole track...

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Originally posted by davedresden i suggest getting the gabriel & dresden prog-a-minute. in 3 easy steps you too could change the face of dance music. batteries not included. - dave