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Hey mate,
Listened to the track. It is good to hear that you know really have a solid build up and the track really develops nicely into the breakdown. The bassline that comes on top of the simple bassline is quite nice.
The track still sounds a bit amateuristic though. Your percussion needs beefing up. Just a bongo and a hihat won't really give you the fullness to the track. The bongoline itself is rather simple. If u give it some delay it would already sound fuller. Just listen to some of the big epic producers out there and here. How they progress from breakdown into the main section and how full and energetic a track sounds then. A good lead is important but the energy and fullness usually come from good percs and bass.
The leadnotation and melody however are pretty nice again. I enjoyed the leadsection.
The ideas in this track are good, you have managed to get a track with a solid structure and build up and a good melody going which is a big improvement compared to some of your previous tracks I heard. Now focus on the details: more percussion, a better placement of the sounds in the mix and better eq'ing (the track sounds mudded and lacks clarity)
Cheers mate you are making more and more progress!
Nomen Nescio
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