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Originally posted by Akia So Salegon, you mean that if you don´t say "nothing special" about everything you are not honest? But I guess my review is the shit-one? And yeas you right, it is. I´m not a producer my self so I can not give detaileds advices, so I guess I will save my time and energy and be a leacher. Thanks heaven there is one compepetent person in this forum who can help artists to be better producers with saying "nothing special". You are my hero! Akia

NO. It's just a statement, nothing more or less. Don't be offended so easily.

Maybe I should underline my statement more clearly:

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Originally posted by Salegon I don't like people that only leech and never reply.

That's what I don't like. Every reply is welcome.

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Originally posted by Salegon you only have one serious reply, which is shite.

The fact that the relation of leaching/replying is so imbalanced concerning bidors post is shite imho, not the reply itself.

As for serious replies: you reply was the "good" one.

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Thank you bidor! I will always listen to your productions and tell what I think.


Akia

You seem to do that often.


Hello Bidor, I'd consider changing the kick and clap and add some more percs and take up the hihats a wee bit to give it a more driving feel.

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Originally posted by Salegon that's the way it should be imho. I don't like people that only leech and never reply.

But this is a PROMOTION forum, and that does not necessarly mean half-assed halfdone tracks but also full scale ones, which is up for promotion, meaning that obviously feedback is welcome but its the promotion that is vital.

Last edited by Sinnica Hax on Sep-28-2006 at 15:51

hey mate

nice oldschool synth.

nice efx here.

reverbed kick is a nice idea. i think the introduction of the main kick could have been better with more energy.

bass - nice bass. kick isnt loud enough imo.

overall the sounds are cool. a good mixdown would make this shine.

drive would improve tenfold with improved mixing aswell.

overall i would say turn down the loudest parts in the mix, bring the kick volume up a load, and turn up some of your quieter synths.

nice track in need of a good mix

rich

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Hey! This is quite an interesting track. I agree that your kick could be a little stronger, it doesn't really punch through the mix like it could. Also, that one effect that is really really high pitched (sorry i can't be more descriptive) is ok once or twice but it started to hurt my ears after that. This may be because i'm listening on headphones though. I think that you could add maybe one more line in before 1:18 as it gets quite repetative and static in parts. Also, i would extend the outro just a bit as the ending seems abrupt. Anyways, I like the main lead and your patches quite a bit. Keep up the good work.
-EE

P.S. If you could take the time to review my latest, "perplexus" i would really appreciate it. If you don't have time though, don't worry about it.

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Originally posted by Sinnica Hax You seem to do that often.

Do I??? Please explain.

Updated Version Done!!

Specs :

320 Kbps
10.6 Mb
4:38 Mins


changes made :


Louder kick,
various effects..
removed bleep,
added vocal,
improved outro...




let me know what you think pls!

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and thanks for all the advice you guys have given on the previous version!

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Great! Love it!


Akia

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Originally posted by bidor Updated Version Done!! Specs : 320 Kbps 10.6 Mb 4:38 Mins changes made : Louder kick, various effects.. removed bleep, added vocal, improved outro... let me know what you think pls! [[ LINK REMOVED ]] and thanks for all the advice you guys have given on the previous version!

This version is better than the first one imo but there are still some things that I don't like...

1.) the first 8 seconds are really good! after that, I exspect something really loud and aggressive. some nice deep bass would do it.

2.) that alien sound effect is ok, but I wouldn't use that as a constant part of the tune.

3.) after 55 seconds: hmm... this bumple-dee-bumb sound and I will never be friends... it does not really suit into your tune

4.) after 1.18: the synth itself is neat, but I don't like the transition. this needs to be worked on.

5.) the track's ending is similar to its beginning which is ok but something more creative would have been better.

overall rating: 5.5/10

This is not your best tune imho but I don't spend my scoring points easily so don't take it too serious.

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Thanks Akia, glad you like it

and Salegon, thanks mate for the detailed feedback/reviews! in my eyes the tune is complete... im gonna work on a new tune soon again, hope you will like that one more as you liked this one


thanks all,


Bidor

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That extremely high pitched high frequency sound hurts my ears...

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Originally posted by DJ Shibby That extremely high pitched high frequency sound hurts my ears...

im not really sure what you mean, could you pls pin-point this frequency?

tnx,

Bidor

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