intense build up u got there.. the bass lacks some low end.. the percussions are good. the main melody is a bit too abstract for my tastes though. and yeah its clipping.. and the clap on every 4th kick.. i liked that.

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Hey Barry

Nice percs at the start...and nice ambience too, bassline is driving too. Not too sure about the main melody in this one, some of the chord changes are strange, and on the third change, the bass doesn't match the melody notes.
Overall though you're definitely improving, though I think this track could do with a better structure, some of the sections seem to happen at random, and the track seems quite 'rushed'.
But keep it up lad!

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