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| quote: | Originally posted by tubularbills
ok, so i just read chapter one.
HILARIOUS!
"Mother******," it said.
classy shit right there, man. i'll take a look at more of it. i dunno how it's going to pan out as an erotic story [i.e., the jello gettin' it on w/ "Dee"], but found it more of a humourous story now.
maybe perhaps cause i'm drunk of wine....but wine normally makes me a bit....randy....so i dunno. it's just the way things are worded.
very conversationalism. it's awesome. it's the way i think. it's the way i write as well. i've gotten a few stories published, and they sound kind of the same format. the main character having an intermonologue w/him[her]self.
good shit, and i wish the best for thee! |
yea dude, the way it's written is totally absorbing (as is-well i wont give away her name) :P
there's funny parts, serious parts and all out fuckfest parts 
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