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nhibberd
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Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Utrecht, Netherlands

hey!

listening
- Nice bassline
- Bit of a standard melody, little new there
- awesome start to the break
- some reverb on your snare is a little too long and sounds weird on top of the rest
- that second lead realy brings the track to life. Untill then i wasn't as impressed but now i am.
- you could work a little more on percs to give a little more drive

other than that, just great

Merry Christmas


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Music has survived wars, famines, the plague and many other things and has evolved with man across many cultures. Dance music is just the next step in the evolutionary chain. My guess is that it will probably be with us untill we are extinced.

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IrisDeeJay
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Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Ourense

Thanks a lot for your closely listening, nhibberd. Yes, I must recognize my style isn't original at all. I should try new sounds and structures and, of course, improve some things.

Many thanks again and Happy New Year!


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Nemesis44
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Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Brighton

Dude, or dudette I mean

You gotta stop beating yourself up over originality, your track is fine in that respect. Besides it comes with time as you develop your own style. Write for the joy of writing and you will find yourself sitting there one day thinging Jesus, did I just make that?

Cheers
Nem

PS
I got the track so thanks for that and will get around to remixing that. Also spoke to the original maker to get his input and he was cool too.


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djdimensions
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: SCV CA

great track overall.


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IrisDeeJay
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Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Ourense

quote:
Originally posted by Nemesis44
Write for the joy of writing and you will find yourself sitting there one day thinging Jesus, did I just make that?


Do you know what usually happens to me? Sometimes I listen to my really old songs; those tracks I made in 1999, when I started producing and I tell myself: "Oh, my god, Iris, this is a shit! There are no eq, no compressors, no delays, no reverbs...and look at all those notes! This was a horrible work, girl! You've improve a lot", hehehe.
Anyway, many thanks for your advise. It's really usefull

quote:
I got the track so thanks for that and will get around to remixing that.

You know it will be a honour for me. Thanks a lot again

djdimensions, thanks a lot for your listening. You're really wellcome


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HarryMoore
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Registered: Jun 2006
Location: Bow, East London

Tengo gusto muy sutil sin embargo yo no tengo gusto del riff que viene en último.

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IrisDeeJay
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Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Ourense

quote:
Originally posted by HarryMoore
Tengo gusto muy sutil sin embargo yo no tengo gusto del riff que viene en último.

Supongo que lo que quieres decir es que no te gusta la melodía principal. Reconozco que es muy comercial y que a los más adictos al trance puede no gustarles.

Con todo, muchísimas gracias por el comentario, HarryMoore. Hablas muy bien español.
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I suppose what you want to mean is you dislike the main melody. I must confess it's too comercial and maybe the most trance addicts dislike it because of this.

Anyway, thanks a lot for giving me your opinion, HarryMoore. You speak Spanish very well.

Happy New Year!


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