Listening:

Nice bass.. clap is a bit to heavy and could have been replaced.

1:45 synth fits well.. a little too expected and the synth itself is very thin and sounds softwareish.

3:00 I like the melody coming in, but again i dont fancy the synth.. and the bass sounds very muddy too me.

overall.. not bad work.. but a vocal sample saying "drop it" or something would be nice.. and the percussions arent very good.. sounds very random.. and there is no open hi-hat.. actually the percussions sounds like its like 3 or 4 layers except for the kick. needs more work imo.

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Hey mate,

I always like the ideas in your tracks. You have you own style, a bit techish with influences of trance. In this track you have all the typical Takkra elements: power, drive and a techisch sound.

Having said that you need to start focussing on getting a better sounding track. Even though the rawness in your tracks is good, you could have a better mixdown (less volume), compress your drums better and eq the melodic parts a little better as well. Now the whole mixdown is out of balance with the almost every sound being too loud and the master being way too loud I'd like to hear a more clear polished sounding track from you in the future

Cheers!

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