This is a bit slow for me, but nontheless a pretty good production.

Nice percusion M8

But i need moreeeeeee , the idea is very good, sounds are very nice but this is to monotonny for me

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Karol

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Thanks much for listening.

Yeah, its monotone, it doesnt even change after the break
but i just felt i had to make this. Pherhaps i can develop this type of sound to be more interesting

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I definitely like this tune great work on it.


I played it on my radio show last night. too bad my mixing was poop :P i'll be playing it more tho.


keep it up.

Hey Subtle - sorry I didn't get a chance to reply to the IM!

I think the other reviewers here essentially hit the mark. The elements are all individually good and it's put together well in the larger scheme. It's also a tad generic sounding and far too long (someone said 7 minutes - I think maybe even a little shorter than that would be ideal).

Two other minor gripes:
- From a mix/mastering perspective it's a little bass-heavy. If that's compression then I'd ease up on it a bit, otherwise EQ a little bit away.
- That high-pitched drum on the dotted offbeat that's panned very far left bugs me; it sounds just a few milliseconds out of time and the panning makes it more noticeable.

Maybe not my best review for you but there it is.

Cheers,
Aaron

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Thanks for the comments.

Digi: yeah i think ur right about the bass. i heard it in headphones, and it needs some EQuing and stuff.

Guess ur right about the dotted left panned. but it doesnt do much to the track, i might as well replace it.

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Hey there

The intro is cool, the pad is ok, the bassline is cool aswell, i also like that acid element that that comes every 16th beat, not sure if it is the sawpad, but i dont think so. The pad melody is cool, i liked it. Vocal effects are well done imo

Its a nice track but doesnt make my style though. its a bit too monotonous at some parts, i miss some more melody, production wise its realy nice


all the best,

Alex

Hey.
This is cool, although a tad monotone as have been said before. I'm usually not too fussy about that. It works for me.
The reversed vocal thing is neat.
I like the percs, sounds snappy and clean.
It's cool how you can get such a dry but still good sounding mix, I usually have to drench everything in reverb, LOL.

Posting feedback as I listen:

nice intro, and in comes a good solid beat - no complaints so far. I like the detail you've put into the background effects, it makes a huge difference and makes the contrast between a good track and great track.

That vocal sample is great, so are the bongos that just came in! really liking how this is going so far. Bassline is nice and deep, could maybe use a dB or 2 of boost around 150 to 300Hz, but works fine as it is.

Just came to a small break, the background effects are what make this track so atmospheric, I love the feel. And in comes the beat again...lovely.

Those pads work so well in this track - I don't think they'd work in any other track, they sound quite dark. Ohh, just heard a little background synth, almost 303 sounding, like it. I've yet to find anything really wrong with this track AT ALL, and i'm a tough bugger to please. This is certianly floating my boat, sounds like something humate would make - you'll know what i'm talking abuot if you've heard the humate remix of Miss Shiva - Dreams.

And here's the main break - beat fading out, atmospheric stuff coming in. Like it so far, that vocal sample really rocks my socks. Nice little breakbeat, enjoying the break a lot and in comes the beat again! If you'd skipped through the track you wouldn't have noticed a break at all, this is one of those tracks you have to listen to all the way through to get the full feel of it. Sounds great to me, really like it.

Mind if I use it in sets?

Thanks for the comments:

Yes, Macker, feel free to use it in any way you want

and thanks for your thorough feedback, much appreciated.

The track being as long and monotone as it is.. i didnt expect anyone to like it at all actually.

And i will check out that Humate track ASAP.

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c'mon c'mon! feedback on my tune then haha. I've scratched your back!

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Originally posted by Macker c'mon c'mon! feedback on my tune then haha. I've scratched your back!

ive already downloaded it. some patience, just got a visit

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