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Kamaya
....You Are Sleeping....

Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Groningen/Leiden, The Netherlands
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Hey!!!!!
It's a really good song. The build-up is perfect, everything sounds as it's supposed to, but there's one thing I'm missing. Like someone else said before the bass-kick is a little bit to soft when the strings are added and also it misses a little bit of a powerfull feeling. Dunno exactly how to explain, but I'll try. When the main melody is put in, the song softens too much. What might help is boosting up the bass-kick into sort off a 'Dumonde' kick, that would really pump it up. Also a strong Hi-hat would make the middle part sound better I believe, something to keep up the pace, d'you understand what I mean? I'm not saying you should make some kind of 'Dumonde' song, but it's more to give you a direction of what I mean. Just add a little bit anger into the song, that's what I'm saying.
But still, don't get me wrong, I think it's a very good song!
Job well done!!!
Greetz, Kamaya
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Apr-03-2002 10:05
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Trancevision
MINDSOUNDSCAPES
Registered: Feb 2002
Location: Germany
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yes DUMONDE KICK would be cool
This tune is far from average and much better than most of those crappy tunes you can hear here on tranceaddict. It 's one of my favourite tunes, but I think DJ Cutoff somehow got the point for the main melody. The Synth beginning at 3:07 should be more original and fatter.
Trancevision
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Apr-03-2002 11:50
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