Thanks for the feedback

very much appreciated.

Something happened, so im replacing it with a sample instead.

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Ok listening. Listening through this one time before I comment on the whole piece.

Pretty cool bassline and percs. Mixing is good. Melody is a bit boring though, I think you could develop this track a lot more by going outside a 4 chord repeat sequence, gets a bit repetetive and doesn't really stick out of the crowd.

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Thanks for the comment.

I had originally a full 10 minute track put up.. but something happened so i replaced it by a sample, and it only samples the main part of the track which doesnt tell the whole story of the track..

I like to keep things simple, so i wouldnt try to put more melodic elements into it.. but i do agree.. i could have added more stuff to the melody though, but frankly, i suck at composing. :\

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Originally posted by Subtle Thanks for the comment. I had originally a full 10 minute track put up.. but something happened so i replaced it by a sample, and it only samples the main part of the track which doesnt tell the whole story of the track.. I like to keep things simple, so i wouldnt try to put more melodic elements into it.. but i do agree.. i could have added more stuff to the melody though, but frankly, i suck at composing. :\

Cool mate, I'm sure you'll get there though, you've already got the mixing skills for it.

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Jan Johnston - Let the world fall apart (E:mortal remix) - Metallic Recordings
Headstrong ft. Tiff Lacey - The Truth (E:mortal remix) - SOLA
E:mortal - Lost Planet - Ministry of Sound & BTR, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Tell me - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Footprints - SOLA, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Coming Home - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Vicky Fee - Say What You Feel - SOLA, E:mortal - Days On End - BTR
Headstrong ft. Kirsty Hawkshaw - In in Your Eyes (E:mortal remix)- SOLA