bass sounds good, it fits well..

kick works along great!

acid comes in, very sweet!!

I like what you do to the main melody as the track progresses

..yet again acid, sounds really clear

the breakdown around 5:30 sounds a little empty to my ears, something is missing..

(this track is lloooong.. my tracks are usually around 5-6½ minutes hehe)

whoa. freakish breakbeat. awesome !!

nearing the end the track sounds more "harmonious" in my ears..

great job you kept me interested though !

very nice track

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Damn. Long track.

Nice percussion atmosphere in opening.

I feel like the laggy kick lends to the proggy feel of the track, so I don't mind it too much.

1:28, that arping synth is hot.

Acid line at 2:10 is fucking on. I love it.

I like that pad around 3:00.

New direction at 6:00. I feel it.

7:30, hot new little acid line. You've shown a lot of adeptness with that 303 squigglebox.

I don't know how to feel about this breakbeat. It kinda starts to get a little full of itself after a while. I'd have just pared it down and gone for less as more.

11:00 a bit more of an epic feel here. I like it.

So now here comes the third movement at 14:30...

And then into the dream trance realm. Very nice melodic elements. I really like that bell synth.

Overall, a very beautiful track. I wish I could hear more like it from other producers.

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex Overall, a very beautiful track. I wish I could hear more like it from other producers.

Thanks, I really appreciate it.

Omer

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120 bpm 20 min i was expecting some chillout track :P got it almost at the end tho , first thing is that i actually didnt get bored listen it so i think thats good for such long track in that bpm , all sounds and whole tracks sounds really pro imo , all instruments have that deepness, i really enjoyed part from 15 min as its more melodic than the rest and i think you could split it in there to make separate track based on that part, anyway nice effort, and i like it

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