8) hi timgosden, glad you liked, thanks for the comments and some tips in general. yes actually this reuploaded version is bit updated,
the lead hifreq is lowered, clap removed and percs level brought down abit

This makes me think of that Kraftwerk Tour de France song and U2's Where the Streets Have No Name. I'm going hiking in the desert in Utah next week, pretty close to the Joshua Tree National Park that Bono went to. This would be the perfect song to play while driving through the desert at night. I'd really like to be able to make a song like this. I'd be most grateful if you could listen to my song C13 and offer any suggestions you might have. Thanks for sharing this.

Agent Starchild

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Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility

very nice tune. I like melodious stuff like this !! I don't give technical reviews cause I can't. Just got an "audience ear" that's it

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Originally posted by twilightki : It feels like something you'd listen to at 4 in the morning, or listen to in your car while you're going in a tunnel.

pretty nice pads all the way through, its got good structure too, I think it could maybe do with a bit more bass or something to fill the lower mid range, preferably something with a lot of melody, as it sounds a bit too airy and "diffuse". Its a pretty good song though, and technically very nice.
I really like when the supersaw melody comes in, its an unusual use of a supersaw, but it really feels good. The pluck that comes in after this could maybe be modified to make it fill the space in the lower mids? Just use a different pluck (maybe more VA rather than FM?) something less woody sounding? Anyway, its pretty good, keep it up

Oh, BTW there was a "luminary" on anjunabeats vol 4 with a song called Amsterdam, one of my favourite tunes on that record, are you that one by any chance? If you are then just carry on, you don't need my advice

Yea I have to agree with the other guys, it needs more low end. It's a bit too "washy" in the highs with too much going on. Just need to trim the sounds a little bit.

The break was a little bit of an anticlimax though. It doesn't really build up to anything before it goes into full swing again. Perhaps try and do a fake build up. At the point where you let everything go again, try and bring it down then build it up again with a stronger snare roll and more sweeps. It would really help with creating more tension and making the break better.

Otherwise definitely a great track. The melody is really nice and it's something I would buy and support

EDIT - You might want to change your artist name. A "luminary" already exists aka Arksun with Ashley Tomberlin.

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8) hi kitphillips, Omega_M, AgentStarchild, Fledz
thanks for the comments, glad you liked it 8)

Witalsky

Listen.....

i like bassline with perc. but melodies are to loud, it's not bad, but
it scants me something deepest.......

Overal is good work....

Keep it up!!
Karol

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8) hi Sunclyder and ********! thanks for the comments 8)