Hey Bidor,

Nice strong kick to start things off. Feels like it sets the mood for the song. We'll see. I think that the percussion in the beginning could use a bit of delay so it keeps things a bit busier.

The treble shifts around 1 minute aren't in key which makes it sound weird to me. I guess you are going for something a bit unusual here. The pad-like lead that comes in is nice and fat. The pattern is fine for a couple of bars but afterwards it'd be cool to introduce a bigger more noticeable break so it doesn't feel dragged.

Not really my style but it sure is original. The production is clean and crisp. Just personal tastes here. Keep going at it.

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everything is grooving pretty good

the lead at 1:10 I think you could just let the first pattern hook and it would work.

about one 1:45 a very quirky lead comes in. eventually gets groovy. there are some very cool sound effects and such, littered around.

around 3:30 is pretty crazy. heh... the sirens .

and then it kinda ends awkwardly, I was kinda expecting it to keep going. maybe extend it?

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nice sound, sounding full and everything.
got some real bottom end on that kick and its booming, sounds sick.

btw what's he saying, the voc near d start lol

interesting melodies, gives off that dark but almost techy feel.

3:23 onwards sounds like theres a lot going on, and a lot of the melodies in my head seem to clutter. sounds confusing lol

not a bad song, but it didnt seem like it really went ne where, i dont think i heard the main melody... if i did then it was more subtle than i thought.

not a bad production, maybe just not my style of music, but yeh, after 3:23mins i was sorta put off by hearing something that just sounded confusing.

keep producing, your mixing, technique and mastering's sick.

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hey bidor!

great track you've got here, everything sounds really good!

nice drive, great drive!

reminds a lot of the 2004 sensation black theme!

great style you're developing here

keep up the good work man!!

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