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Originally posted by Omega_Blue oh shit dude i've heard this track a few times. solid work, especially for a first production but like everyone else said, you should definitely shorten it a bit. sometimes it feels like it takes an unnecessarily long time to get from one element in the track to another. perhaps instead of phrasing your "transitions" (so to speak) from 16 measure phrases, cut it in half. i dunno.

yeah i think certain parts could be shortened but i do like the longer intro and outro.

Tom - i was gonna try to cut out the part of the set from Saturday where i played this track but it froze up and crashed Audacity because it's 464 minutes long. it's going in my next demo for sure though.

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