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listening...
i am not much of electro fan, but i'll try to give as precise feed as possible,
00:15 - good atmosphere, drum sounds maybe bit too tight for my taste
00:30 - hats sound a bit too dull for my taste, if could eq or compress that even more i think it would sound better.
00:57 very nice, i like it so far except the drum, maybe add a little variation to it or reverse here and there.
01:26 - now the drums actually fit in the song  so then maybe you could introduce them earlier with a filter.
01:40 pecussion is great actually, like it a lot
02:40 i appreciate this brake down, however it could of been a little more stereo wise, since the lows are pretty much gone, you could of pack that high end with something. again just my opinion, there is nothing wrong with what you have, its just that what i could of done.
03:52, could of introduced drum-roll that fades, in my opinion having a brake down this long, could use a little more induction back into main beat again.
03:55 very atmospheric, i hear bass needs to be tightened up, of course you dont need to record a new one since it could be easly done with a simple mastering.
now at 4:44 it just goes into brake down again without any iduction, again use a simple drum roll, sweeping effect, rev clash and a clash.
dosent have to be too nice, as long as there is some indication for people that dance to it for them to catch their breath and prepare for another minor brake down.
4:48, could of played with your kicks a little there to spice it up as well as through out the whole track.
Bass definatelly needs more energy and low boost, but do not worry about it, it could be fixed at the final stage.
Overall, a few things i find apperant is that your skills progressed very quickly in terms of quality, seem to be balanced and well performed, trust me that after proper mastering, this track would sound perfect, believe me i know.
Good work, you should be proud!
cheers
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Thanks for sharing!
