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No offense to some of the posts here but I get the impression they're 'wanting' something different out of what you intended, comments trying to pull it in the direction of something they find more favourable.
For me, it's great - more intricate details are needed though, subtle blending, movement. My take on this track is that it needs to keep the listener interested not in a 'hey, check out this change' sense but in more constant sense of tamed and eased development.
The strong prominent bassline is great, I feel it makes the track in many ways....the track doesn't lose itself to 'sameness' with other prog-like tracks. It's just the slightly bit too 'raw', could do with being dulled that slight bit, contained if you like.
The distorted pad, for me, needs to be slightly more wispy...immersed in the track - there's a rawness about it, I used the word 'contained' before and that might perhaps be what I'd like to see again.
All my opinion though and in fairness you have mentioned it was just an afternoon's work. I don't listen to so much music these days, I've found the world of electronic music to be bland and sterile. This track, however, I did find myself enjoying - even in it's relatively rudimentary state (I hope!). Thanks for sharing it.
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