I for one love the kick, hehe.
Melodies are great as always.. Nothing wrong with the arrangement in my view, there's plenty of interesting stuff happening. I'd take a closer look at the mixing and the volume levels, though. As said before, the percussion doesn't seem to come through properly. The track sounds a bit muffled as well - the higher frequencies could use a slight boost.

Anyway, lots of potential.. I hope you'll keep working on it! Keep us posted.


Oh, I forgot to mention.. Gorgeous title, BUT: save it for a track that has cold ambient structures or something - it really doesn't reflect the sound or the mood of your track, hehe.

Last edited by TOR on Sep-20-2007 at 21:07