i vote cheezy not because the premise of the composition is legit and love the (lfo mod? cuz it doesnt sound like SC comp.. love it) ducking on the lead. just make that lead sound not from 90s anthem trance and make it like something more unique than the overused supersaw. at this point in trance you really cant get away with using sounds that common anymore. otherwise i think the track could be slammin. bass is fine but IMO i would "electro" the bass a tad to help "modernize" the track.

and whoever said the eqing/comp needed a boost.. ditto.

Nice track, good melody and effects. As said before, some more lows would help to improve the track.

Good job on this tune. Cheese, however, is generally an overall effect of the instrumental. Since I didn't feel like I was listening to Ian Van Dahl, or happy hardcore, or tweaty pizzaro stabs... I voted not cheese. However, I would vote cheese on the overall timbres used for the leads and pads. There's a fine line... and I no longer know where it is.

I'm with Sunclyder, a breakbeat would have improved what little I heard of the breakdown. The melody takes a stab at different directions, but is enforced better by the backing string-synth.

I might have added more "oomph" to the bass... and had it duck with the kick. That's just me, though.

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