I think its quite good I liked it, nice one Jeff, it reminds me a lot of the wet and hard techno tracks that Corvin Dalek, and Oliver Klein spin, around 1 minute when the beat and the bass kick in its mint, it would really work well in a Dalek or Klein set.

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charz for the input guys and gals

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Here's my view of things, great peice of work. This would work in some hard set made by Oliver Klein..
Nice m8

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One of the few ones left

I reckon it's mint.

Ok, not bad for a first attempt:

1. Your levels are way off, make sure the gain for both tracks are the same.
2. In your first phase the high hats are too lound and flat, they to get lost and are more of an intrusion than a compliment.
3. From the 6:42 mark to the 7:15 min things sound really cluttered, try to tune out the highs on the it doesn matter track.

All in all I think it just needs to be "polished". Good work

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Originally posted by trintiy Ok, not bad for a first attempt: 1. Your levels are way off, make sure the gain for both tracks are the same. 2. In your first phase the high hats are too lound and flat, they to get lost and are more of an intrusion than a compliment. 3. From the 6:42 mark to the 7:15 min things sound really cluttered, try to tune out the highs on the it doesn matter track. All in all I think it just needs to be "polished". Good work

oh and you spelt your name wrong i assume it is supposed to be trinity

hehe, sorry couldnt resist, i know it is an old joke

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Oh yeah well, You like Judge Jules

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Originally posted by trintiy Oh yeah well, You like Judge Jules

Yeah well your american

And this is the uk forum. Your the one who is lost

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*Rolls up Daily Sport* and swats fly on screen

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Originally posted by trintiy *Rolls up Daily Sport* and swats fly on screen

Heh the daily sport, lol how could you swat me with that. I am an upper class fly, only swatted by the daily express and the telegraph

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Originally posted by flystyler Yeah well your american And this is the uk forum. Your the one who is lost

he isnt lost... he's a convert! one of the soundest yanks i know anyhoo

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Originally posted by tu_face he isnt lost... he's a convert! one of the soundest yanks i know anyhoo

Damn i never know when you r joking, yeah me and trintiy r playing

Everyone is welcome here, well except torontotitaddict

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