-didnt like the kick that much.. has 2 b more cutoffed imo
-clap is a bit 2 loud
-how the 1st synth drops in.. thats a bit 2 loud imo.. but the synth and the mel itself is pretty cool
-the strings are a bit 2 `harsh`.. they have 2 b softer..
-the main mel rulez
-when the drums kick in (still @ the main mel).. it needs a bit more power
-the part around 3:35 is pretty cool how u change from mel 2 the `normal` part of the track
-bass is a bit 2 harsh
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
cheers 4 the comments guys will all b taken in2 account hopefully i shud get the next chunk knocked off 2morro, i wanna get the other track half done 2nite
Have to agree with mantis on the claps being abit load, turn them down abit and maybe take a tiny bit of reverb off.
I think the first synth that comes in is abit loud aswell. maybe fad it in? Cos it kinda scared me!
I love the melody!
I wouldnt mind doing a remix either! :-)
Would be gatefull for midi/flp
Peace and nice work!
May-04-2002 17:40
capricorn15
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Registered: May 2001
Location: CA
nice song,
in the beginning, sounded like it was gonna be a tune like fire and ice - out of darkness, but i guess wasnt that dark, i love fire and ice, so i love this tune, nice work
May-05-2002 07:42
Haak
analog evading shark
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Nice tune, but I think you need to work a bit on the sound. There's too much reverb on alot of sounds IMO, especially the clap. And it sounds a bit too fruity.
will all b taken in2 account 
