I actually think the piano is OK really, it might just be my speakers. I think the production overall is quite good. I'm not familiar with the original really, so wihout comparing: I really like the percussion , its panned out really well. I thought the track was just boring until 3:30, when the drums come back in, I think you might want some more bass or strings in that breakdown just before to play a harmony and add interest, otherwise its just a bit bland. The lead sound doesn't really do anything for me, but it doesn't detract much either, so its ok.I think you could use another element to add more melody or something, but otherwise its quite good. .

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thx for the feedback!

Hi mate, going to listen to your production.

Nice start, good kick and subtle percussion. I dig that!

Summer feeling comes up, lead coming up. Feel that it's a bit low in the mix, volume wise. Just a bit.

!that melody! i have a Trance energy set of Dumonde i think 2002 and that melody is played in one the songs there as well..
I think the melody is correct but i am not a midi expert.

Mixing wise i think the harmonics should be more prominent in the mix, when i put it very loud, the kick/bass dominate to much.

I guess it's a theme of a movie? i have no idea where this melody comes from

As for the song, i think more details should be put in. It's hard but slow music needs stuff to keep people listening.

Thats about it

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thx for your feedback, mate! let's see what can be realized from your suggestions in the rework... (10 days to go until my last exam )

you're right it's the movie score from 'the beach', that's why i called it like that in the subtitle!

oh sorry I didn't check your tune zentrum, didnt see it until now..but im really, really tired, so you'll get me full attention tomorrow have a nice evening!

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Originally posted by Takkra oh sorry I didn't check your tune zentrum, didnt see it until now..but im really, really tired, so you'll get me full attention tomorrow have a nice evening!

no prob, mate!

The Pads are beautiful in this track, and the piano sounds great.

Great Job!

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Originally posted by xxonemanriotxx The Pads are beautiful in this track, and the piano sounds great. Great Job!

glad you like it!