The melody is nice, but I think it could be improved by a sharper lead sound. The one you have right now just seems too stereotypical and almost like Superwave P8. Overall, the track is very nice and dreamy, but again, the lead needs more of a professional edge to it in my opinion.
BTW, I am really loving your "I Wish You Were An Ending Ascent (Magdelayna Mashup)." It's just so good...
Feb-27-2008 00:25
adam_rodriguez
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
Cheers for the comment phantom limb,the main synth actually has a few more subtle under-lying synths with it,that bulid as the melody progresses,but maybe they are not that noticeable....ive tweaked it a bit more now and have sent promos to a few dj's
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Perth, Western Australia
Hey there, took a listen and me likes! Sure the main synth is a little less meaty than some others out there but the melody is strong enough to stand on its own and it's reminiscent of older style classic trance ... But hey, what's oldskool can be new again, just listen to NuNRG - Kosmosy.
Nice job, and be sure to keep us informed on what the labels think about this one
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Mar-08-2008 16:56
Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
Nice one =] I'm sure Addison will love it!
Mar-09-2008 02:40
adam_rodriguez
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
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Originally posted by Evolve140
Nice one =] I'm sure Addison will love it!
hehe yeah,he played it in his latest episode but i think he really needs to sort out the compressor on his whole mix,it badly sidechains tracks,and mine sounded pretty bad tbh..
Now here is a great track great pads very flowing the breakdowns the sounds are all great.The vocal add sounds great also nice eq nice track man i enjoyed this great work cheers
May-09-2008 06:03
AudioGuru
tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
I liked it good work. great production.
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May-09-2008 14:39
adam_rodriguez
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
Cheers Godsend & Audioguru.....This was supported by Aly & Fila recently in one of their sets & Will B is confirmed as one of the remixers so far on the forthcoming release
