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Originally posted by Newman NewX oi advocate, you think thats a cool name like your some kind of devils advocate, I don't think you know s#@t about trance music, I was going to allnight raves when your Mum was still wipin' your ass, don't like you, don't like absolutely nothin' about you, are you a serious human.

Well I was tryin not to get drawn into this but fuck it. You think you're an accomplished dj? Thats why you're trying to give people handjobs so they will buy your album for a fiver. I'm 26 pal, so I've been around a while. You sound like a 15 year old with spots ready to be squeezed, sitting playing on ejay.... Woohoo!

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Originally posted by Newman NewX Yeah I am serious as a matter of fact, if you don't like it fine, you should still buy the album though if you claim to be a tranceaddict, its simple, if you like trance you will like it

It's not that simple. You can like a genre without liking every track in it.

Repetitive elements are fine, but you need to balance them with some kind of modulation. This track could use a lot more percussion and also a bassline. If you want the synth that starts at the beginning to be your bass, you should make it a bit deeper, and then maybe add another element on top of it. The track could stand a beefier kick as well.

Acid tracks typically have spare percussion, but they balance it out by using more variation in their synth lines than you have here.

I hear some potential for a banging techno track in this. Speed it up a bit and make it more repetative and see what happens?

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Originally posted by advocate Well I was tryin not to get drawn into this but fuck it. You think you're an accomplished dj? Thats why you're trying to give people handjobs so they will buy your album for a fiver. I'm 26 pal, so I've been around a while. You sound like a 15 year old with spots ready to be squeezed, sitting playing on ejay.... Woohoo!

Fuck it your right, I'm a cheeky sod who got a copy of Reason, been doing it a week and think I'm f'ing Carl Cox or some shit, sorry pal, thanks for this argument, it'll give me the oomph to actually learn how to do it proper like!!! Whats your favorite track of all time, I think mine is Cygnus X - The Orange Theme, at about 5k.

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Originally posted by Newman NewX No Poland was liberated in 1945 at the end of world war 2, world war 1 ended in 1918 and it did not involve the invasion of poland that was the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand.

i know a little bit more about it, because as you can see i'm from Poland
PS more kindness. not everyone has the same taste like you...

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Originally posted by Newman NewX Fuck it your right, I'm a cheeky sod who got a copy of Reason, been doing it a week and think I'm f'ing Carl Cox or some shit, sorry pal, thanks for this argument, it'll give me the oomph to actually learn how to do it proper like!!! Whats your favorite track of all time, I think mine is Cygnus X - The Orange Theme, at about 5k.

Well I was only guessing, but turns out I'm right.

is this for real??? It sounds like some 8-bit mono amiga mod - a bad one at that.

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Originally posted by MrJiveBoJingles It's not that simple. You can like a genre without liking every track in it. Repetitive elements are fine, but you need to balance them with some kind of modulation. This track could use a lot more percussion and also a bassline. If you want the synth that starts at the beginning to be your bass, you should make it a bit deeper, and then maybe add another element on top of it. The track could stand a beefier kick as well. Acid tracks typically have spare percussion, but they balance it out by using more variation in their synth lines than you have here.

I have taken your advice, resequenced and recorded my track, listened to yours liked it, you must have put a lot of time into that!!! Anyways here is the new one
I beefed up the beat with a TUBE overdriver, modulated the acidic tune more and hopefully it sounds better!

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Originally posted by Jimb0b is this for real??? It sounds like some 8-bit mono amiga mod - a bad one at that.

Thats only 1 freebie track, theres 16 more on the album, you shouldn't judge a book by its cover!!!

... but to be inspired to buy an album you have to like a track off of that album. I cant see the other tracks being any good judging by this. Give us another example of one of the tracks if your that confident.