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Originally posted by Pjotr G Listening now....I think the lead in the intro is too loud, it takes all the attention. Also the intro is too long for me... The lead cuts annoyingly thru your mix....haven't heard your club mix yet....but that really spoiled the, otherwise cool, song for me the sound that comes in at 5:30 is wikkid But listen to the bassline at exactly 5:40....it is one tone too high for my gut It's got the right melodys, the right instruments, the right structure (tho arguably the break at 5:something could have come sooner) but the mix is definately lacking....(relative volumes of the channels) Just my honest 2 cents, will listen to the club mix too some time

you should really listen to the club mix man
everything u mentioned here is fixed there + some fx and changes in the melody


thanks for your time and comment!