and dude, we DO have a producers promotion section why do you keep posting your clips in the c0r. you're not gonna get much constructive feedback here. but oh well i'll give you a few pointers - you NEED some melody in there, maybe not real chord changes, but at least 2 or 3 notes or plucks playing here or there, just to make it less miserable. I mean the whole thing is you holding down that bass key with an 8th note arp on it and playing some drums. no.
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Jun-03-2008 13:00
shaw
RIP
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Intergalactic Mimosa Station
Originally posted by StanVoid
you NEED some melody in there, maybe not real chord changes, but at least 2 or 3 notes or plucks playing here or there, just to make it less miserable. I mean the whole thing is you holding down that bass key with an 8th note arp on it and playing some drums. no.
it's a good base for a track, like i said i just started.
and i post in the cor, cause even if you guys are insulting, at least i get views and replies.
i'll post an update later tonight.
Jun-03-2008 22:17
iammesol
Burnt out and grown up
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Atlanta, USA
Sharing unfinished work is production suicide, at least for me.
Jun-03-2008 22:22
nrjizer
vive le deep
Registered: Jan 2001
Location: Bumfuck, GA
quote:
Originally posted by iammesol
Sharing unfinished work is production suicide, at least for me.
