Why do you send this to labels anyway? It lacks structure and it doesnt sound good. Try to arrange it better, and work some more with the synths and drums. You need to evolve more before you start sending stuff to labels. Would you buy this tune?
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Originally posted by Speactra Why do you send this to labels anyway? It lacks structure and it doesnt sound good. Try to arrange it better, and work some more with the synths and drums. You need to evolve more before you start sending stuff to labels. Would you buy this tune? With time you know what you're doing, and what music it is you create. Sorry to say it, but someone has to

no its cool but i wouldnt put my best sounding copy on youtube , its compression can ruin a track anyway , i put it on purely for feedback as its a near rough copy , and like you said i have worked on it , masteringly and structurely and before you ask no , i am not putting it up here just yet

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Originally posted by adi_hanson no its cool but i wouldnt put my best sounding copy on youtube , its compression can ruin a track anyway , i put it on purely for feedback as its a near rough copy , and like you said i have worked on it , masteringly and structurely and before you ask no , i am not putting it up here just yet

its not just the sound mate... your lines and ideas sound dull and uninspired to me, it just isn't musical enough... but thats my opinion...

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It sounds rubbish....you should spare the labels by not sending them such filth..really sorry mate, but you honestly can't think that it sounds any good?

vortex thank you for the feedback ,and BTW it is a rough , very rough youtube trial of the general anthems and arps.All the percs are unmastered ,EQ'ed and un finished and muravei , please comment on tunes nearer your own style,as this is very different to your music which unfortunatly bored me to death , as with all minimal music.

and p.s they are not replying saying ' how dare you send us such filth'

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Originally posted by adi_hanson vortex thank you for the feedback ,and BTW it is a rough , very rough youtube trial of the general anthems and arps.All the percs are unmastered ,EQ'ed and un finished and muravei , please comment on tunes nearer your own style,as this is very different to your music which unfortunatly bored me to death , as with all minimal music. and p.s they are not replying saying ' how dare you send us such filth'

minimal? care to elaborate?

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last part wasnt aimed at you , the user muravei , i was on about

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I do think it needs some work though if you want to send it off and I'm not in anyway refering to the technical aspects of the production but the actual arrangement and composition needs work.

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Originally posted by adi_hanson vortex thank you for the feedback ,and BTW it is a rough , very rough youtube trial of the general anthems and arps.All the percs are unmastered ,EQ'ed and un finished and muravei , please comment on tunes nearer your own style,as this is very different to your music which unfortunatly bored me to death , as with all minimal music. and p.s they are not replying saying ' how dare you send us such filth'

Ooopsy...don't think you have to listen to hardtance to understand that this certain track is no good. No hard feelings