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Originally posted by Raphie Patches are ok'ish but i think you will find that when exploring the potential of this track further you will move to Techno territory rather than Trance. I sort of feel your angle where you want to head to, there is some kind of hook hidden in there (though it's currently far far away) My 2ct's: Listen to a lot of Deep Techno tracks, build a Tribal type minimalistic groove dramatize your hook a lot more and build up to it only 2x or 3x in a 5 min track rather than 200 times in 1min loop. Also start counting 1-16 and respect the flow of dance. f you take all of this into account i will be prepared to give you further feedback on your next version (which should ben be posted in the producer promotion subforum)

This is exactly what I wanted! Thank you Raphie i will take your advice on board!

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Originally posted by Raphie Patches are ok'ish but i think you will find that when exploring the potential of this track further you will move to Techno territory rather than Trance. I sort of feel your angle where you want to head to, there is some kind of hook hidden in there (though it's currently far far away) My 2ct's: Listen to a lot of Deep Techno tracks, build a Tribal type minimalistic groove dramatize your hook a lot more and build up to it only 2x or 3x in a 5 min track rather than 200 times in 1min loop. Also start counting 1-16 and respect the flow of dance. f you take all of this into account i will be prepared to give you further feedback on your next version (which should ben be posted in the producer promotion subforum)

This is exactly what I wanted! Thank you Raphie i will take your advice on board!

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Processing a highly structured and complex pattern of sensory input as a unified percept of "music" is probably one of the most elaborate features of the human brain.....understanding how music is perceived and how it may elicit intense sensations is far from being understood.

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Originally posted by Raphie Patches are ok'ish but i think you will find that when exploring the potential of this track further you will move to Techno territory rather than Trance. I sort of feel your angle where you want to head to, there is some kind of hook hidden in there (though it's currently far far away) My 2ct's: Listen to a lot of Deep Techno tracks, build a Tribal type minimalistic groove dramatize your hook a lot more and build up to it only 2x or 3x in a 5 min track rather than 200 times in 1min loop. Also start counting 1-16 and respect the flow of dance. f you take all of this into account i will be prepared to give you further feedback on your next version (which should ben be posted in the producer promotion subforum)

This is exactly what I wanted! Thank you Raphie i will take your advice on board!

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Processing a highly structured and complex pattern of sensory input as a unified percept of "music" is probably one of the most elaborate features of the human brain.....understanding how music is perceived and how it may elicit intense sensations is far from being understood.

Needs lots and lots of work. If this was my production i would clear the slate and start again

So very many annoying sounds

yeah I agree Im going to wipe clean. Ill explain why i made this i really make melodic euphoric trance. A lot of harder interesting glitch packed trance is coming out with heavy low ends and it really gets me going I wanted to have a go. Maybe i stick with what i know eh? lol

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Processing a highly structured and complex pattern of sensory input as a unified percept of "music" is probably one of the most elaborate features of the human brain.....understanding how music is perceived and how it may elicit intense sensations is far from being understood.

anarchy!

I pretty much agree with Raphie here, study the structure of other songs you like and try to keep it together in yours. About making the over all sound better, there's probably a little road to walk in choosing sounds, mixing, applying effects like compression and so on, but those things are great fun to learn and experiment with. So keep working. Also check out earlier threads about mixing, kicks, compression etc. in this forum, which I find is a invaluable source of relevant information.

/Cheers

And I really don't see the point of being rude to beginners, we have all been there...

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[i][b] And I really don't see the point of being rude to beginners, we have all been there...

Thanks so much do you know I have been on this forum one week thought it would be full of fellow trance lovers all happy and nice and stuff everytime I post someone always starts taking the mickey then others join in its crap being a newbie

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Processing a highly structured and complex pattern of sensory input as a unified percept of "music" is probably one of the most elaborate features of the human brain.....understanding how music is perceived and how it may elicit intense sensations is far from being understood.