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Hey cryophonik Great track, now I used to post on this forum heaps along time ago and only only recently started reading the forums again and your the first track ive listened through the whole way.
Great base and a possible hit imop. Now people say its sounds old probably cause it sounds eurodance/vocal trance but to me the mix of both styles is great.
My import would be the marsting needs work, but as far as song wrighting is great melody and she has a great voice, nice moving basline and some warmer heavy reverbed pads would help even more.
I would love to be taken higher at some points like the lead after singing, maybe try and octave higher? and her singing in the chorus maybe? she needs to use more power in her voice, only in the chours to realy let everyone know that shes realy feeling what shes saying. I also think the break with the piano needs to be shortened, the track drops to much engery for to long, get a better sounding piano to (listen to Robert miles)
7/10
would love to here a better mix, cause I would buy something like this
keep it up man
Peter
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Last edited by Peter Campbell on Jun-13-2009 at 11:01
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