- use a different font that isn't so silly
- use a different font for the practical information
- make the big text bigger or the small text smaller
- don't title it 'wedding invitation, use your names, or a big date or something. otherwise it's just too generic.
- bigger margins
- don't use that kind of clip art

- be more careful with capitalization and grammar

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Originally posted by [N]ûk|êû[Z] right, so im getting married in september, and i am designing my own wedding invitations.. but im kinda stuck as to what i put on them textwise. has anyone else made their own invitations? if so, what did you put in them?, and what did they look like? this is what i have so far...

IMO this looks like your little sister put it together.

Best thing to do is to review a few that you like and use those as templates. Since your a graphics designer I'm sure you can put something worth of presenting to your fiance


best of luck mate

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Originally posted by digitalbreach IMO this looks like your little sister put it together. Best thing to do is to review a few that you like and use those as templates. Since your a graphics designer I'm sure you can put something worth of presenting to your fiance best of luck mate

+one hunnit billion

Make it look professional and inviting rather than cheesy and childish. No bright colors and fluffy text with hearts, keep it simple and make it look like you'd invite the mayor to it

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here you go

OMFGGGG

Edit: "tenderly" LMAO

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haaaaahahahahahaha thats amazin

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Originally posted by Leon haaaaahahahahahaha thats amazin

WTF is up with your sig?

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Originally posted by Theresa WTF is up with your sig?

he's got some kind of weird beef with ********. It's like it's his life goal to mention him in all his posts.

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Change that font it looks like its a Halloween event , download this font

http://www.dafont.com/english.font

Also don't use red , black is just fine for invitations.

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haha nonsense, I actually think ******** is badass.. I just thought htat picture would fit perfectly in there

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Originally posted by nefardec whoa, i would be really embarassed if i sent that to people for my wedding. that looks like little jimmy mcjameson's 4th birthday party invitation you should consider getting a creative professional to work on it. I know you are probably spending a lot of money on other things, but this is going to be one of the tangible memories you have of the ceremony afterwards... if you PM me your price range I might be able to help you out.

This.

I feel sorry for you if you're a graphic designer by trade and you think that's passable stuff.

Also, fail at posting wedding date and venue on the internet; I'm going to come and egg the bride.

what are you talking about? i would pay top dollar for a design like that. is awesome.

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