I am just a noob at producing but, from an inexperienced producers ear, I would have to agree with the above comments. I would suggest cleaning out the lower range sounds, especially if you are after a more tech feel. It seems to lack some identity in terms of style and it may be improved by going either a bit more techy with more layers of sparse rhythmic synth sounds/loops, or more progressive with better defined hooks that develop at least in timbre. It could be improved with more variations - something new happening at least every 8 or 16 bars.

Digi Nut may have come off abrasive but it's the truth. We have all been there. You've been working your ass off and you're ready to share your first track with your peers and hoping for a good response to validate your work and it doesn't come.

It's only a small let down. It should open your eyes slightly. You may not understand what they are saying so the best piece of advice is look at one/some of the inspirations of your style you're trying to create in the track and listen and see differences between your track and theirs. It will come. Just keep plugging. You'll get there.

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Originally posted by mfitterer1 Digi Nut may have come off abrasive but it's the truth. We have all been there. You've been working your ass off and you're ready to share your first track with your peers and hoping for a good response to validate your work and it doesn't come. It's only a small let down. It should open your eyes slightly. You may not understand what they are saying so the best piece of advice is look at one/some of the inspirations of your style you're trying to create in the track and listen and see differences between your track and theirs. It will come. Just keep plugging. You'll get there.

thanks for the vote of confidence having spent the best part of a day pulling it apart i found the parts it needs. i'm not worried about loosing face with the rest of ta as I'm more then happy with my with what i do. just thinking outside the box

i know this sounds tight..
but its almost 100 mb's lol

make it a 320 kbps that ways its like 20mbs lol more ppl may download it.

thats like 5 tracks in one (size wise lol)

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