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Originally posted by Nightshift Here we go yeah I really enjoy this tune except for the low bass was too quiet and i think the kick needs a lil boost in the 3khz range to give it some presence. But other than that i love the warmth of this track its very nice, lots of feel.

thanks man, since posting this link I've worked a lot on the low end and its starting to sound a lot more present. For a while I was real scared of cranking the bass since as I'd heard so many other amateur producers falling into the trap of going too far with it so I was definitely undercompensating. Really grateful for the advice I got here, gave me that push I needed to overcome my paranoia, haha!

I'll upload and post the fresh mix of this as soon as its ready, would love if you would take a listen and see if its sounding more balanced!

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Originally posted by Nightshift lol then i really wonder how you feel about andy blueman's tracks.

Fuck , i just youtubed him and listening to everlasting , and even thru Youtube , that is way to fookin loud wtf...

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I personally love Everlasting (Emotional Mix)

and i dont even like uplifting trance much anymore.

its really all up to taste.

But I do see this track sort of heading in the direction of alot of andy blueman's tracks but warmer.

And yes when you post a more updated version let me know and i will listen.

I was kinda getting into this one.
Even though it was really high-ended, i liked melodies and it was a really happy song.
It's sounded quite 'Whirloop'ish but i think it's only because of the 'shakes' that are also on 'Vandringsleden'.
Good shit.

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Originally posted by novastorm (not sure what this is called in programs other than Reason)

This is a great song. Is Reason the only program that you used?

i loved it great work! lovely song can imagine it on armins trancecast or something.

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fix 4:53, then I'm going to use it in a set lol!

YES YES YES!!!


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I love it,

Don't worry about criticism, we all are here to help.
It is all about expression, what is in your heart.
Systole (Re-Edit) sound grate for me.

Keep it up.

Well apologies for not responding to some of you guys, there seemed to be a general consensus emerging that the low end needed serious work so I was focusing on getting that done. Thanks to all for listening though, MUCHLY appreciated!

So I've made some changes and beefed up the low-end considerably, although I suspect its still far from perfect, the dynamics on the waveform don't look any better than before, sigh. I should probably shift my focus to some other tracks I've got in the pipeline and leave this one be for a while as I think I may go off the deep end if I hear this even ONE more time, haha. Anyway, let me know how you think its sounding if you can be assed. Cheers

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Originally posted by Bayou Boy This is a great song. Is Reason the only program that you used?

Thanks matey, yeah just Reason.

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Originally posted by Suli Salerno fix 4:53, then I'm going to use it in a set lol!

Ha, yeah that bit was giving me a fair bit of grief, Reason makes it really hard to make it sound just perfect. I've given up and simplified it... I am defeated -_-

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Originally posted by meriter YES YES YES!!! *wings*

i LOL'd

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 I love it, Don't worry about criticism, we all are here to help. It is all about expression, what is in your heart. Systole (Re-Edit) sound grate for me. Keep it up.

Many thanks, I agree about the expression thing, it's the only reason I make music. It's a bonus if your expression doesn't render listeners with imploded eardrums though.. haha.

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