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Originally posted by Gimenez Great smooth track overall. The only neg was the last part that there are a lot of sounds at the same time, it kind of becomes a little noisy. Over all drums, bass and melody all match very well. Good job man!

Thanks a lot man. You know at first I thought this track was really stupid/cheesy. But I put a little more work into it and got some great responses. =D

Wow excellent track. I really liked it, my only critique is on the finally mix down/mastering it could be cleaner and at 4:34 when you have the synths filter out it almost sounds like it filters out too much and comes back maybe smoothing that out would sound better but over all its really good. Any chance i can get a copy when youre officially done?

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Originally posted by Artois Wow excellent track. I really liked it, my only critique is on the finally mix down/mastering it could be cleaner and at 4:34 when you have the synths filter out it almost sounds like it filters out too much and comes back maybe smoothing that out would sound better but over all its really good. Any chance i can get a copy when youre officially done?

Thanks for listening dude. Yea mixing down that massive supersaw chord sound will take some hard work and my ears aren't that trained(been producing for about 9 months). And yea I will def smooth out the High pass. And about the copy, of course I'll post it up here for everyone to download =).

I really like this track too. As TL said the groove is spot on.


The only minor thing i'd look at adjusting is the thickness of the bassline. Id try layering another sub bass over the bassline you already have as the track progresses and put a bit of chorus or something on it otherwise the bassline gets a bit lost as the other elements come in. You'll still hear the attack of the original bassline but get the guts of the sub to push it through the mix a bit.

Excellent stuff.



edit - the chords at the end are a little harsh, it might be worth scooping out some EQ about 2-5k and then send the chords out to a reverb that can keep some high end to it, panned left and right.

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