ive listened to quite a few actually, I'll start leaving comments. I just figured I'd leave the comments to the more experienced producers than myself. I suppose I can offer personal feelings on the tracks and not as much production advice.

thats what i usually do myself, i dont usually comment too much on the mix, unless something is really off. although there are exceptions and i open my mouth on certain things aha.

Hey i'm feeling what a lot of the other people around here have to say, your track is good but the mixdown needs some work. I actually like the mouse like squeeks a lot, maybe turn them down a little. I was contemplating buying the rockit 5 speakers but the guy in that audio department told me that the mid-low mix sounds rather bland on them, and this seems to be one of the problems you're having. maybe try to look for a more 'flat' monitor system to mix it on, or tell the people mastering it to bring those frequencies out more!

overall, its a nice track. you've got some really good vibes going on there.

thats what some people are also saying klein, the mid on the krks are not the best, i was thinking about them, but passed. i leave the mids for my headphones, and the bass mostly on my hifi for now. not the most accurate, but will do until i get some serious monitors, like genelec or adams.