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Originally posted by Lascodi The critisism is correct, it's too little action in this track. Too long break for just one instrument, even if it's supposed to minimal, and there is no climax part after the break. I like the melody and percussion also, but the kinda boring way it's presented should be changed. Bring more small details, cuz it's the details that count in minmial tracks.

Thankyou Lascodi

Harsh but fair comments and i think everyone of you guys is correct and i cant wait to re configure this tune and get your feedback again on it

Once again thankyou for all the feedback given!

Congrats on the mixdown.
I like this style a lot, wouldnt call it minimal, it's more neotrance, but who cares... cool track.

Like this one, drumloops are very smooth. only the break part is a bit boring. Lead sound is awesome, inth break a miss a low fundament bass. Guess that will add some more depth in that part. Like the idee, but just need some work on some parts.

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Originally posted by Amfora Like this one, drumloops are very smooth. only the break part is a bit boring. Lead sound is awesome, inth break a miss a low fundament bass. Guess that will add some more depth in that part. Like the idee, but just need some work on some parts.

Thanks for your words and advice amfora, im currently working on this track again to correct certain parts of the track. Again i will then upload it for you and others to hear and see if theres an improvement!

Thanks again fot listening

please see the intro again as ive changed the link to the updated mix

http://www.sendspace.com/file/qomyz4

updated mix link

please guys i need some feedback on my updated mix

anyone?

Find a page I don't have to sign up to get free access to downloads. Because now it says it's working on full capacity, and I can't download anything. I recommend a site where you can stream the track directly, like soundcloud, esnips, myspace, speedyshare (if one have quicktime) or something like that.

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thanks for that lascodi, i will bear that in mind for next time.

The link seems to be working fine now

Can you upload to Soundcloud or something similar? Sendspace always give me the same "Full capacity" bullshit.

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sounds nice! i like the track!

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