Alright, I personally think the kick just comes in a little too awkward especially with the snare. Dont know how to say this but theres a little bit of an empty space in the mix, the pad seems a little too high and airy, the bass is a little dry too. Add a sub, sidechain it. I love the guitar, keep it, very powerful!

quote:

Originally posted by sako487 Alright, I personally think the kick just comes in a little too awkward especially with the snare. Dont know how to say this but theres a little bit of an empty space in the mix, the pad seems a little too high and airy, the bass is a little dry too. Add a sub, sidechain it. I love the guitar, keep it, very powerful!

I think you may be right about the drums, the intro was probbly rushed a bit as my ears were going off a bit when I was finishing the track off, i've decided to do another mixdown so i'll try and blend the intro a bit better.

I have played around with the bassline a bit but there's an awful lot going on in the mix and I decided to leave a bit of room in there, which is quite unusual for me

The pads, well I just love thm that way


Thanks for the comments

___________________
Soundcloud

Wow - this sounds great! I think you've got just the right balance of instruments in there now - it leaves lots of room for the vox to shine, effects to come through, etc. And, yeah, the guitar is definitely a nice touch! Nice work, Geoff!

___________________
cryophonik.com | facebook | soundcloud

Sonar Platinum | Ableton Live 9 | Logic Pro X | Access Virus TI2 Keyboard | Kurzweil PC3X | Nord Lead 4R | NI Maschine

Can't ask for much more than a 'wow'

Cheers Dave

___________________
Soundcloud

very well!!!. So did you do everything but the vocals?

___________________
I didn't do it.

quote:

Originally posted by goodtime very well!!!. So did you do everything but the vocals?

Yes, apart from asking a pal of mine to play the guitars too. The track was started from the ground up with just a vocal acappella to work with.

___________________
Soundcloud

I already gave you feedback on this, but here's a bump for what it's worth. Really well balanced track, I can easily see a lot of people liking it!

quote:

Originally posted by Owsey2008 I already gave you feedback on this, but here's a bump for what it's worth. Really well balanced track, I can easily see a lot of people liking it!

Muchos appreciados fella

___________________
Soundcloud