i like thge saw ting, but see how some may not... maybe dont change it?

I think the strings could sound fuller, maybe add lower notes alongside the high ones to fill it out.

Break down is cool, it maybe goes on forabit without much chnaging... maybe add some more sounds in there like uplifters etc...

i was hping the melody from the break went intothe beat, but alas cant get everything I wan.

Maybe after a little while of coming out of the break and played the different melody for a bit, bring the melodys from the break back into the beat.. if that makes sense?

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Originally posted by mark_gg_daniels i like thge saw ting, but see how some may not... maybe dont change it? I think the strings could sound fuller, maybe add lower notes alongside the high ones to fill it out. Break down is cool, it maybe goes on forabit without much chnaging... maybe add some more sounds in there like uplifters etc... i was hping the melody from the break went intothe beat, but alas cant get everything I wan. Maybe after a little while of coming out of the break and played the different melody for a bit, bring the melodys from the break back into the beat.. if that makes sense?

Thanks for your feedback mate, its appreciated.

I was thinking of doing another version too, which uses the break melody in the main part of the song also, so will post that up to when i get aroud to doing it.

Thanks again for listening!!

thanks to everyone who has left feedback.. I have just moved house so everything is a lil up in the air at the moment, once settled i'll put the feedback into practice