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Originally posted by Viber Well, the beat did sound nice on my Altec Lansing ATP3 , BUT then i put my Headphones on and it sounded a bit 'messy' to me...like the kick and the bass are playing twice without sync...

Thanks for the compliments. I liked the attack that was formed in the offset of the kick and bass, but I can understand that might need some finessing, in the future.

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Originally posted by Kysora I really like it, though I think it'd be nice to have some kind of intermittent melody playing on top of what's there, it sounds like there's plenty of room in the mix and the arrangement for it Great mixing too, nice work

Most of my tunes tend to be quite dense, but I think I've been tending towards that to make up for a lack of sound quality I haven't been able to achieve, until now (be it because of maturity or the fact that I've upgraded both computer and DAW - from Project 5 to SONAR). I'm not arguing your point, though. Just glad you liked what you liked.


Thank you, both, for the compliments and the honest critique.

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I like the atmosphere here and it displays some originality which for me personaly is what most gets my attention nowadays.

There's something about the kick drum that bugs me - I'm not sure, but to my ears it sounds like it's flamming / doubled.

Nice work.

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great track, definetly uique from whats out there, and i enjoy the switch ups now and again!
9/10
nice job, cant wait to hear more from you.
peace.

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interesting track, i like your use of vocals and i have not much to add. maybe a suggestion would to be to later on in the track make a atmospheric lush pad section, which i think would go well.

Hey Eddie,

Left some comments on SoundCloud - nice one, impressive man.

Finally back home - back to business.

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The update is a LOT better! Hypnotizing beats. It really drew me in.

Gonna check out more of your work on Soundcloud.

Nice man!! Nothing else to add i guess as in previous comments
some bits maybe should be changed a bit BUT, thats only my talk
keep it up !!
check also my newest track

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greetz!

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Listening yo.

I like that synth that comes in after about a minute.

Kinda trippy after the little break.

I can hear that some sounds are out of sync, but it sounds nice.

All those delayed sounds and stuff works nicely.

However i got to say i do miss a proper snare drum to the rhythm, overall nice stuff.

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Thanks, guys. Glad you all like the updated version.

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