Nice, will do!

Bounced down a draft full version 320kbs if anyone is interested.

Will add more to it and refine some of the filtering, etc. At a later date.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/h8s3jp

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sounds great!!

Pretty explosive once this gets going! Nice synths and amazing acidline, it just needs a bigger punchier kick and some inventive percussion to really modernise it. I also agree that you should substitute a new melody in there and use this for one of your own tracks!

Holy shit is that really Greg Murray..

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Originally posted by novastorm it just needs a bigger punchier kick and some inventive percussion to really modernise it

Indeed.

Nice 303 line. I think that there is a lot of room for improvement. Everything sound bare and dry right now to me, more like a foundation instead of a full track.

I would work on introducing new elements into it and perhaps try working on a more unique structure.

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Originally posted by Owsey2008 Indeed. Nice 303 line. I think that there is a lot of room for improvement. Everything sound bare and dry right now to me, more like a foundation instead of a full track. I would work on introducing new elements into it and perhaps try working on a more unique structure.

Ha ha everyone is loving the acid line, was the easiest thing to make out the track!

I might try and rework the arrangement, but atm I am getting a bit bored of it.

Can you expand on the dry bare and dry? The lack of percussion was a concious decision since I wanted most of the drive to come from the main synth, which eat up a shit load of headroom in the mix. That's also the reason why I stripped back a lot of elements so when it comes back in at 4.40 it just launches the track off again.

It's never meant to be a sophisticated work, just a full on trancer. Party kinda tune.

But if you would explain some of your comments a bit more I'd be grateful, thanks for your review!

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I should've worded my comment more appropriately

Personally, I prefer my tracks to be full of different sounds that really grip the listener. With trance I rarely find this, but I forget that it's music made with a dancefloor in mind!

I guess that in this case less is more, so definitely take my criticism with a grain of salt.

nice material mate
there are some moments to be fixed 02:03 (?) but i bet you know what to do so finish it i would like to hear the full version. like it

check also my newest single

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...49#post10392749

greetz!

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Originally posted by Owsey2008 I should've worded my comment more appropriately Personally, I prefer my tracks to be full of different sounds that really grip the listener. With trance I rarely find this, but I forget that it's music made with a dancefloor in mind! I guess that in this case less is more, so definitely take my criticism with a grain of salt.

Not at all man I welcome the comments! Just wasn't sure what you meant.

It was made 110% with the dancefloor in mind, I know it needs fixing, I'll sort it someday.

Thanks again.

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Originally posted by Sheen Trickz nice material mate there are some moments to be fixed 02:03 (?) but i bet you know what to do so finish it i would like to hear the full version. like it check also my newest single http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...49#post10392749 greetz!

Yeah it was a rought draft, not sure what sound you mean at 2.03? Dodgy filter job perhaps?

I'll sort it out proper soon. Thanks for your comments anyway, I'll check your track now.

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