Cool track, Geoff! I'm much like Owen in that I don't tend to listen for specific little criticisms - I'm much more of a big picture guy. Also, I think most of the criticisms you've gotten so far (particularly concerning the pads) are of the personal preference variety, rather than objective, technical comments. I tend to listen with an open mind and try to remove any personal biases.

To me, the drums aren't much of an issue because they aren't the focal point of a track like this - the melody is. So, more variation in the patterns would probably be good, but the melody carries the day anyway, so it's not a necessity as I see it. I actually like the kick - it's somewhat generic, but that's OK with me. I definitely would NOT like to hear a "bigger" kick in this track, for the reasons discussed above.

BTW, I love that blippy arp that comes in around the 4:00 mark - it's very suitable for a "robot" track and TBH, I was sorta expecting more of the blipply/glitchy stuff, based on the title of the track. But, going overboard in that direction can be too obvious/cheesy, so I think you've managed a nice balance there.

Like I said, great track and actually one of my favorites from you and one of the better tracks I've heard in a while. Sorry, I tried to find something to complain about.

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Thanks Dave, some useful non tech feedback there.

I'm actually with you on the big picture way of thinking and tend to leave mixes when I think they're good enough for my own listening purposes.

this track had a few labels sniffing round though and when the idea of it being released hit me I realised there were a few holes in it in that respect. Even now that i've decided not go down the label route I still want to attempt a proper releasable sound. It's just a personal challenge really!

And yes, the 4.00 arp is my absolute favourite part of the track, and the reason I haven't finished it properly. I want it to go on a bit but haven't quite worked out how yet!

cheers

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