Left comments @ soundcloud. Sounding good! I really like where this track is going and the mix sounds very punchy already.

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Thanks again chaps.

I've not quite zoned in on the sound of the HS80s yet. It seems that small changes I make in the mix translate to much bigger changes on 'normal' speakers.

As ever it's just a case of getting used to meh gear.

I think i've gone 'kick deaf' too

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Update

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A fair bit added and a big gap where the break will eventually be. All that's in the break so far is....The Primate Army

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The kick drum sounds much more plesant this time around, but I'm not a fan of the percussion in general.

I think you have some really nice components in this tune being held back by some really overused elements; elements that I'm sure you know I do not like.

To me, it feels like that great lead sound is lacking the freedom it deserves; like it's been glued in to fit appropriately with the typical trance elements and lacking a mind of its own!

Damn, I really hate doing this sometimes. I do try to help out, but looking over some of my responses, I sometimes get the intuition that rather than being constructive, I am in fact speaking far too personally. But I guess that I can't judge from a regular listener's standpoint if I'm not a fan of the genre.

Keep it up, old bean. I look forward to hearing more.

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Originally posted by Owsey2008 The kick drum sounds much more plesant this time around, but I'm not a fan of the percussion in general. I think you have some really nice components in this tune being held back by some really overused elements; elements that I'm sure you know I do not like. To me, it feels like that great lead sound is lacking the freedom it deserves; like it's been glued in to fit appropriately with the typical trance elements and lacking a mind of its own! Damn, I really hate doing this sometimes. I do try to help out, but looking over some of my responses, I sometimes get the intuition that rather than being constructive, I am in fact speaking far too personally. But I guess that I can't judge from a regular listener's standpoint if I'm not a fan of the genre. Keep it up, old bean. I look forward to hearing more.

Mate your feedback is invaluable tbh.

I've said it before, but I really don't care who likes or dislikes my music because it is, as you say a personal thing. And I say that with a smile on my face and absolutely no bitterness at all. The fact you can be objective is a bonus for me

All I ask for in feedback is from a technical standpoint, as a relative novice to producing again.

I probably exclude 90%of people out there who listen by steadfastly sticking with 15 year old trance tunes, but that's what gets me going.

As always old chap, I appreciate the listen.

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Originally posted by tehlord Update

Hats now seem a little over-present, but not annoying. Wait for that sentiment to be echoed before changing - it's right on that verge, for me.

I am digging the shit out of this, once the track gets going. Really very top-notch stuff. That lead fucking kills. Reminds me of a Beatmaster v. Chicane tune - only better! Can't wait to hear the finished product on this.

*bangs head to rhythm*

Oh, and the break should obviously be a place-holder and it's far too short.

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Hehe, the break's too short.

Your wish is my command.......

Yeah i'm still not 100% on the hats, and i've actually pulled them down a bit too!

Once I get the other 300 parts into the track i'll give it a thorough mixdown fo' shizzle!

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defo sounding more pro now its got me tapping me toes the main lead you're using is clashing a bit as owsey says give it some room

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Originally posted by owien defo sounding more pro now its got me tapping me toes the main lead you're using is clashing a bit as owsey says give it some room

Good call.

I may use the lead to duck out a couple of elements as it only happens a few times in teh track


Thanks for listening

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Listening now man, sounds like a big step forward with the new gear! It reminded me a bit of the Askew style which I'm not really in love with but everything sounds pretty well balanced to me. The mid bassline especially struck me as having a nice lush feel to it. I'm using a pair of HS80s too and I really love them, I hope you three will be very happy together also!

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Very nice. How many layers you use for the bassline?