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Originally posted by EddieZilker You'll regret this, sir. I do not like being toyed with! If you and tehlord don't finish your respective songs, I'm recording their streams (yes! I see you made your clips downloadable but still...) and slapping together an unauthorized mashup of both songs REGARDLESS OF THEIR KEY!! Love that flute sound, btw. Bass does sound a little muddy on the second clip, but I'm sure I can clean it up - should you and tehlord decide to make that necessary. All told: Excellent, so far. Now finish the song!! Backtracing! The consequences will never be the same.

Hey,

Haha, that would be one ugly sounding mashup lol.

I'll clean up the low end tomorrow. For the second clip I deliberately wanted those huge stabs to be the biggest and lowest sound, and for the bassline to sort of sit on top of them during that part, if that makes sense. I'm not sure if it comes across properly, and I think that the new untreated room I am working in might cause me to have problems with the low end...hmmmm. Anyway, I'll have a look at it again tomorrow and do some low cuts in places.

Thanks

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Originally posted by Avatar One For the second clip I deliberately wanted those huge stabs to be the biggest and lowest sound, and for the bassline to sort of sit on top of them during that part, if that makes sense.

Totally. Maybe it's the bass-line bleeding into the kick or the decay on the kick lagging a little too long. Also, wait and see if anyone else agrees with me on this. It was almost nit-picky of me to say it since, ostensibly, what you have down there rocks. It was just some boominess that I noticed which I thought could be cleaned up, a little.

I just gave it a second listen. What you might try doing is cutting the low-end on the bass-line, coincidental with the chord stabs, at 60-80Hz, to let the kicks have their own space from 30-Hz and up.

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When the stabs are playing a faster riff earlier in the track I have cut them hugely, everything below around 220 or so hz, in the second clip, I've actually pumped them up massively. In fact, I don't think I've EQd them at all, I'll check later and trial rolling off the lows on the bassline coinciding with the stabs as you suggested...hmmm, some sort of filtered sidechaining.

I normally roll off everything below around 200hz on every channel except the kick and the bass, and I always cut everything below 20hz regardless. That 2nd clip is the first time I haven't obeyed my rule

Thanks for your input, this is my first track in our new place and I'm still unsure of the acoustics.

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I've finished the track, I'm really happy with the way it's turned out I've edited the first post to play the final clip....or you can play it here:

Avatar One - Jacinta's Voyage (final teaser!) by AvatarOne

Now I need to try and get it signed to a good label

Mike

P.S. I refuse to limit the hell out of my tracks. It should be loud enough, but if it isn't turn it up!

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Last edited by Avatar One on Sep-05-2010 at 16:43

I've got a couple of interested labels I could talk to. hehehe... solarSwarm (a rather unique project) and 'smü[th] though I think the Swarm would be a better home for the sound.

Hit me up and we can discuss if you are interested Avatar!

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Sounding good still.

I'm only listening on sennheise buds but i'd prefer the elastic bassline to be a bit more forward. You may be able to use a bit of mid EQ to pull it to the front a bit, or maybe some multi band distortion, exciter etc.

Great stuff

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Originally posted by tehlord Sounding good still. I'm only listening on sennheise buds but i'd prefer the elastic bassline to be a bit more forward. You may be able to use a bit of mid EQ to pull it to the front a bit, or maybe some multi band distortion, exciter etc. Great stuff

Thanks for your thoughts I'll take another look!

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Hey all,

Armin Van Buuren played the Temple One remix on Ep516 of ASOT ( http://www.astateoftrance.com/episodes/episode-516/ ). SolarStone also had that mix as his 'Big Tune of the Week' ( http://www.solarstone.co.uk/radio/ ). It comes out on the 18th July on SolarSwarm, and has remixes from Adam Fielding (Hybrid inspired, now that he's signed to Distinctive!) and Temple One. I had to remove the original's SoundCloud link because the label asked me to, although you can hear a clip of the original in the player at the top of the screen here:

Original Mix - Jacinta's Voyage

or Temple One's remix here:

SolarStone's 'Big Tune of the Week': Avatar One - 'Jacinta's Voyage' (Temple One Remix) by AvatarOne

Thanks for all your input!

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Great work - somehow I missed this thread earlier!

Always love your work. Grats on the support.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Great work - somehow I missed this thread earlier! Always love your work. Grats on the support.

Thanks Richard! It seems to be doing well. Manuel Le Saux has it in his 'Top Twenty Tunes', and SolarStone has just opened his last podcast with the Adam Fielding remix

It comes out on the 18th of July, if you're interested.

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It's out today, here's a short video preview of the orignal mix, Temple One remix, and Adam Fielding remix:

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