Seems like you got the vocals to fit in there nicely. The drop is disappointing though. The track darkens at the drop and that robs the energy even more.

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Originally posted by Beatflux Seems like you got the vocals to fit in there nicely. The drop is disappointing though. The track darkens at the drop and that robs the energy even more.

this is exactly what i was thinking - that last drop should be face-melting with the supersaw melody in full force but glitching and sweeping in and out - maybe some extra percussion to carry the groove at that point til the track tapers off.

really cool song

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I really like the percussion elements in this track. the Whip sound and the little bloop sound help create a cool rhythm. I couldnt help but bounce a little when I played it!

Rhythm, groove, melody are really catchy and driving, nicely constructed and with some interesting sound selection in it, got me grooving and this is really good sign lol, as far this last drop, I would prep this before you massively drop that final sound and would, kind of let it hang foe a two or even four bars with heavy sidechain to it and the rest, looks like you have very good control over lol - really cool idea Richard!!!!

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Cheers fellas, all feedback is noted.

Here's quite a chnage for the track, mainly the breaks.
Break 2 went a bit trancey!

Sweeps to add.

You aint nut'in by Dirtbox Divas

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Very cool, guys. Nice, dark, brooding and groovy. Love that bass-line, too.

Word. I particularly enjoyed the use of organic FX, like the lash.

I think the breaks are a little empty in contrast to the rest of the track, and could perhaps benefit from some extra weight, but that's my personal preference getting a hold on me. I guess with bigroom the contrast is all the more powerful when it drops back in.

You fellas are going to be mighty popular if you keep this up. Good stuff!

Nice work, sounds good to me!!

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OWSEY - After your post I made the break a lot fuller and driving and it ended up leading to this drop - quite anthemic, almost trance for once eh!!


Aintnutin Anthemic last drop - whips on a stage mix by Dirtbox Divas

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Don't kill me, but I listened to the original a few more times before you uploaded this one and it grew on me, I forgot to post but I definitely prefer the original version over this one.

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Seandroid, try it now - BIG LEAD and even a bit of me sing in there, and hopefuly a break rise that might spine tingle ya, ha



AINTNUTTIN BREAK N DROP by Dirtbox Divas

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Our breakdowns are similar. That's kind of weird, haha.

The part where you high pass the track needs some white noise though, It's a little jarring, and I feel like you could both build more to that drop and have it slam in harder with some more impact and riser effects.

I like the track a LOT more this way though. Nice work.

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I'm getting a broken link Rich, are you updating again?