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Originally posted by orTofønChiLd yeah don't listen to robby rox, keeep up the good work

nothing what he said was out of order at all. if there's no room for constructive criticism, then cue implosion of the world. it sounds good so far--but I may echo a few of the things robby rox said--perhaps experiment with at least one element that's loosely quantised

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Originally posted by DJ Robby Rox It was ok. You need to focus on actually creating grooves though. You have no really defined grooves in either track. Just very rigid up and down sidechaining type stuff. They are both very bouncy and lifeless imo. Make them more energized, swingy, unstable, groovy, etc etc. You're making it too easy to predict what will happen next and they both have an overquantized feel. Just trying to offer some construtive criticism.

+1

You can still have a grooving track with straight quantization.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

Sounds bloody good, who needs a £50k studio eh! Comparative levels are great. I moan about my nasty monitors, but this shows you can achieve a great deal with the right ears, mm.

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