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Originally posted by Joe_N Hey man, Typing as I listen. Nice percussion but as already mentioned it could do with a bit more movement and groove, I would look at adding some delay or subtle delay. Another good way to spice up delay is to add some effects like phasing or a flanger again that can be done subtly just to spice up the percussion and make it less artificial and dry. I think some more FX in the intro would be good to give it more atmosphere and keep interest. Nice little build snares sound good, I think someone mentioned adding a higher layer to the lead which I agree with as there seems to be a gap in the higher frequencies of the track. I like the sound you are going for though. I don't really listen to this sort of stuff so I'd take my feedback with a grain of salt. I think the arrangement could be a little more defined just to make the various segments of the track more obvious. Cool change adding the wobble synth, sounds almost deadmau5y around the 3:00 minute mark. Quite a dark track, reminds me of something else but I can't remember what atm. I think the transition around 3:48 could be smoother, maybe echo the elements out into the breakdown. I think some FX throughout the track would well actually just to give the listener something else to listen to. Outro was a bit long for me. Overall it is a pretty decent track, I think the mix was pretty clean so good work there, I enjoyed it, nice work

Thanks for the feedback. I have been working on it a bit and have already addressed some of the things you mentioned. I will experiment with the rest.

Really very good bass sound and bass end mixing.

I agree the percs and groove need to be a lot better though and to gradualy evolve and vary throughout. Nice melodic tune this.


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