I hate to beat a dead horse here, but I came back to this track and I think I properly mastered it this time, plus I completely redid the entire intro and added a few things.

I think there may be a tiny bit of quality loss over Soundcloud, the track doesn't quite pop out as much as it does in the original file. In any case, I'd like feedback on the end result. Comments, and especially constructive criticism! Thanks

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Heya,

This isn't flogging a dead horse at all... actually, it makes good sense to get input on your track.

Regretably I think the mix down is in need of some serious work at the moment, it's a wash of highs and the levels are all over the place.
The white noise is waaaay too harsh.

I can tell that this will be an awesome track, but the mix down is so far from perfect.

By the way, what do you use to produce and would you object to sending me all the parts without EQ and I could have a go at seeing what I can come up with?
Admitedly there are those out there that could do this better than me, but I would be willing to give this a shot.

Let me know your thoughts

Cheers
Nem

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I use Reason 6 and do all of my mixing/mastering in-house. I can bounce the channels and send them as separate .wav files if you would truly be interested in helping me with it.

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Last edited by Jemuel Pavlic on Jan-09-2012 at 14:04

Hi there,

Yes, I would be very interested in looking at this, but just be sure to remove all the EQ from the channel wav files.
Please try to avoid channels with more than one sound on it, as this will make the process harder to get clean.

Send me a PM when you have this and I will tell you where to send it.

Cheers
Nem

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